Thursday 19 December 2019

SPCA

For the Summer learning Journey, we had to write about a good cause. Here is mine

 

5 comments:

  1. Kia ora Amelia,

    My name is Beren. I am a blog commenter from Auckland and I will be replying to your blog posts over the summer. I am really looking forward to reading your posts and getting to know more about you.

    Well done on creating such a fantastic blog post! I can see you have really done your research and also put a lot of effort into designing your post. All animals deserve to feel safe and loved, so I think SPCA is a fantastic charity for the work they do.

    I see you also have a cat, a dog, and 6 chickens of your own. That’s quite a family of animals! If you could adopt another animal, what would it be?

    Thank you so much for sharing your blog post! Just a reminder, whenever you use an image from the internet, make sure you attribute the image with a link to where you got from. You can see examples of this on the Summer Learning Journey activities :)

    Keep up the good work Amelia!

    Beren

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  2. Hi Amelia,

    I loved working with you and your team around raising funds for the SPCA and wasn't it wonderful how much you were able to raise with the support of the school.

    I have loved seeing how passionate you and your team are and it is this passion that made this project so successful.

    Thank you for letting me be a part of your learning journey and enjoy your Xmas break.

    Regards,

    Mrs B.

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  3. Hi Amelia,

    I am signing off for the year now, but I will be back on the 6th of January to catch up on all your blog posts. Good luck, and enjoy your holidays!

    Beren

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  4. Hi Amelia
    I like the word art you have used for the activity, where did you get it from ?

    Take care
    Caleb

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  5. Hi Amelia, Hannah here. I like your post. Next time you could read your writing before you post because at the end I think you have some spelling mistakes, and after and they can't afford it you could put a coma or a full stop, because you have a lot of writing but no pauses in there so maybe you could add some. From Hannah

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