My name is Beren. I am a blog commenter from Auckland and I will be replying to your blog posts over the summer. I am really looking forward to reading your posts and getting to know more about you.
Well done on creating such a fantastic blog post! I can see you have really done your research and also put a lot of effort into designing your post. All animals deserve to feel safe and loved, so I think SPCA is a fantastic charity for the work they do.
I see you also have a cat, a dog, and 6 chickens of your own. That’s quite a family of animals! If you could adopt another animal, what would it be?
Thank you so much for sharing your blog post! Just a reminder, whenever you use an image from the internet, make sure you attribute the image with a link to where you got from. You can see examples of this on the Summer Learning Journey activities :)
I loved working with you and your team around raising funds for the SPCA and wasn't it wonderful how much you were able to raise with the support of the school.
I have loved seeing how passionate you and your team are and it is this passion that made this project so successful.
Thank you for letting me be a part of your learning journey and enjoy your Xmas break.
Hi Amelia, Hannah here. I like your post. Next time you could read your writing before you post because at the end I think you have some spelling mistakes, and after and they can't afford it you could put a coma or a full stop, because you have a lot of writing but no pauses in there so maybe you could add some. From Hannah
Kia ora Amelia,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Beren. I am a blog commenter from Auckland and I will be replying to your blog posts over the summer. I am really looking forward to reading your posts and getting to know more about you.
Well done on creating such a fantastic blog post! I can see you have really done your research and also put a lot of effort into designing your post. All animals deserve to feel safe and loved, so I think SPCA is a fantastic charity for the work they do.
I see you also have a cat, a dog, and 6 chickens of your own. That’s quite a family of animals! If you could adopt another animal, what would it be?
Thank you so much for sharing your blog post! Just a reminder, whenever you use an image from the internet, make sure you attribute the image with a link to where you got from. You can see examples of this on the Summer Learning Journey activities :)
Keep up the good work Amelia!
Beren
Hi Amelia,
ReplyDeleteI loved working with you and your team around raising funds for the SPCA and wasn't it wonderful how much you were able to raise with the support of the school.
I have loved seeing how passionate you and your team are and it is this passion that made this project so successful.
Thank you for letting me be a part of your learning journey and enjoy your Xmas break.
Regards,
Mrs B.
Hi Amelia,
ReplyDeleteI am signing off for the year now, but I will be back on the 6th of January to catch up on all your blog posts. Good luck, and enjoy your holidays!
Beren
Hi Amelia
ReplyDeleteI like the word art you have used for the activity, where did you get it from ?
Take care
Caleb
Hi Amelia, Hannah here. I like your post. Next time you could read your writing before you post because at the end I think you have some spelling mistakes, and after and they can't afford it you could put a coma or a full stop, because you have a lot of writing but no pauses in there so maybe you could add some. From Hannah
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