In room 5 we decided to do some writing about Sid the cat because we are learning to describe, use present tense, linking words and group our writing in paragraphs. Here is my writing.
Sid
Who is Sid? Sid is the curious black and white cat that comes to school. We named him after the book Six Dinner Sid because he demands food from the teachers and we think he has another home.
Sid has patches of short strands of black and white fur and he has a smudge of black shaped like Africa on his triangular nose. He has a long skinny black tail and short soft silky fur with swampy green eyes and white pointy whiskers.
Sid rubs against my legs in the bus line and eats his food that Mrs Whitmore consistently puts in his small food bowl.
Sid likes to be cuddled by students of the school. He purrs as I scratch him under the chin and above his ear. He jumps up onto the milk bins and he tries to get into the classrooms.
That is sneaky Sid.
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